Should gambling of all kinds in the USA be outlawed? Gambling is one of the most poplar games in the U.S., especially in Los Angeles. Most people who gamble can’t stop even if they lose a lot of money. Actually, it is an addiction because you can’t stop doing it. In addition, gambling depends on the luck which only makes it a high risk game. Also, it is not a physical game which makes people play it only for money. Most people who gamble are under stress and depression which leads to negative consequences, such as heart disease and mental disorders. Honestly, I’m against gambling because there are a lot of games can replies it without a high risk.
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"In addition, gambling depends on the luck which only makes it a high risk game."
Actually, gambling doesn't depend on luck. Winning depends on luck. Also, gambling itself is not a game. There are different games, such as blackjack, roulette, and poker which are games and are considered forms of gambling.
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"Also, it is not a physical game which makes people play it only for money."
You have used 'which' to show a result or effect. However, to 'play for money' is not an effect of 'is not a physical game.
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"Honestly, I’m against gambling because there are a lot of games can replies it without a high risk."
Here, you need to use an adjective clause after "games." "Replies" is not the word that you want.
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I hope my comments help.
Derek
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